I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tyrell I am Felix from St. Bernadette's School. I like the moves that you put into your dance. The handshakes showed that you were altogether as a team. How long did it take you to make up the dance? I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Hello Felix! Thanks for the feed back! It took my group and I about a day or two to come with our moves, there was a lot more we were going to add, but it would've been to long, thank you for the feed back!
Hi Tyrell, this is Tama a year 6 student from St. Bernadette's School. I like your video that you made, it really stands out. I like the move and that you now know how to do them off by heart. How did you do that?. I am looking foreward to seeing your next presentation.
Hello their Tama! Thank you for your opinion! I really appreciate it. In order to remember all the moves, you have to keep on practising. Thank you for the feed back!
Hi Tyrell, My name is Kalafi and I'm a year 6 student at St.Bernadette School. Your gymnastic was amazing. Did it take long to think of some movement for the gymnastic? I can not wait for your next post.
Hello Kalafi. Thank you for the comment! My group and I took a day or two to figure out the moves, there was still more, but we didn't want to add it. Thank you for the feed back!
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Hi Tyrell I am Felix from St. Bernadette's School. I like the moves that you put into your dance. The handshakes showed that you were altogether as a team. How long did it take you to make up the dance?
ReplyDeleteI look forward to seeing more of your work.
Hello Felix!
DeleteThanks for the feed back!
It took my group and I about a day or two to come with our moves, there was a lot more we were going to add, but it would've been to long, thank you for the feed back!
Hi Tyrell, this is Tama a year 6 student from St. Bernadette's School. I like your video that you made, it really stands out. I like the move and that you now know how to do them off by heart. How did you do that?. I am looking foreward to seeing your next presentation.
ReplyDeleteHello their Tama!
DeleteThank you for your opinion! I really appreciate it. In order to remember all the moves, you have to keep on practising.
Thank you for the feed back!
Hi Tyrell,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kalafi and I'm a year 6 student at St.Bernadette School. Your gymnastic was amazing. Did it take long to think of some movement for the gymnastic? I can not wait for your next post.
Hello Kalafi.
DeleteThank you for the comment!
My group and I took a day or two to figure out the moves, there was still more, but we didn't want to add it.
Thank you for the feed back!