I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tyrell, I really like your presentation, it is really cool. I really feel feel sorry for Shafiq Ola because He has to pay the family debt. maybe next time you can make your words bigger because it was hard to read because they were really small. Thanks
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ReplyDeleteHi Tyrell,
ReplyDeleteI really like your presentation, it is really cool. I really feel feel sorry for Shafiq Ola because He has to pay the family debt. maybe next time you can make your words bigger because it was hard to read because they were really small.
Thanks