I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 25 September 2017
W.A.L.T... Use appropriate language features for a pick a path story
What I found easy: How to make it
What I found hard: What to write about
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeletei like how u done full stops and capitals through out the story and how u are being ur self
a sentence from the story
One day, me and the Ghees jumped in the new whip
maybe map it out next time cause u cant read the whole sentence cause the sentence has gone off the p
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