The life of a car.
It's about 12:15pm, as I get driven out to the car dealership, there's a price tag on me, which says $9,500.
As I sit there in the hot boiling sun, the owner decides to close the shop for the day, when suddenly, a couple of boy racers pull up, with a couple of bags.
As they walk in, they ask what type of car I am, the owner tells them, “This car is a Skyline gtr r34 godzilla, twin turbo with a rb20det motor”, “How much is it?” asks the few boy racers. “This is $9,500” says the owner. The boy racers reply and say “i’ll take it”.
As I we come flying down the motorway, we happen to see a couple of flashing lights, immediately, I start boosting it. When a couple more flashing lights appear. I start panicking, we take a sharp right and out onto a main road. Each end of the street was blocked off, so we had to pull over.
It’s been a couple of weeks, long days spent in this boiling hot sun, some days it feels like i'm gonna burn.
On one cold day, pouring down with hail, the officers finally come out and release me from the impound lot.
As my engine roars, I slowly drive out the impound. I get out and I spot the boy racers again. They jump in and then we take off. As we take off, my engine roars, but we quickly have to make it to the gas station, otherwise i'm gonna be stuck on the side of the road.
Now it's time to hit the road and make it back to huntly, catch yous up, chur.
hi tyrell I really like how you put yourself into the cars shoes. maybe next time you could fix your punctuation.
ReplyDeleteHi Tyrell,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kalafi and I'm a Year 6 student from St.Bernadette's School. I absolutely love your story about life of a car and how you were the car. I would like to know why you have decided to write about this car? I look forward to hearing back from you.
Hello Kalafi, thank you for the positive feedback! the reason why I picked to be a car, is because I wanted to be different to everyone else, because they were doing foods. Once again, thank you for the positive feed back!
DeleteHi Tyrell,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Gustan and I'm a Year 6 student from St.Bernadette's School. I absolutely love your story about life of a car and how you were the car. I would like to know why you have decided to write about this car? Next time you could get a picture in or make a picture. I look forward to seeing more work from you.