I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 21 November 2017
The Ghost and the human
W.A.L.T... write descriptively using a range of language features
Something I enjoyed was... Finding the rite sentences/words to put in
Something I didn't enjoy was... Using the language features because I didn't know when to use it
hey tyrell really like the slideshow.I like that it is one that says to be continued. Next time you could put a different photo instead of the same one over and over
Hi Tyrell its Samuel, I loved that story because it was interesting and scary my favourite part of your story was when the door swung wright open by itself. Maybe next time you can make sure it makes sense. I can't wait till your next post.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hey tyrell really like the slideshow.I like that it is one that says to be continued. Next time you could put a different photo instead of the same one over and over
ReplyDeleteHey Petelo, thanks for the comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Tyrell its Samuel, I loved that story because it was interesting and scary my favourite part of your story was when the door swung wright open by itself. Maybe next time you can make sure it makes sense. I can't wait till your next post.
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