Thursday 30 June 2016
Monday 27 June 2016
Thursday 23 June 2016
STRANDED.
On one sunny afternoon, my friend jake and I went on a big ship, we were going from Australia to India. It was just going onto 9 o’clock and we were just having dinner. Then me and Jake fully dozed off to sleep when suddenly everybody starts yelling “THE SHIP IS SINKING”, so my friend grabs a hold of me and we both start freaking out and start screaming we were both shocked then jake takes me to the spot where we jump on the boats, then we tried to leave the boat was not working and it was only me and jake on it, so, we left the boat and swam to a island
We don’t have any food so we went for a dive to find some sea food, just as I was coming back up this shark came up from nowhere and tries to bite me but thankfully jake saves me from that, so we go for a walk looking for sticks and branches for our fire. I lighted the fire, Jake puts the fish on, That was our dinner for tonight, so we doze off to sleep and then we get up, we quickly go jump in the sea because we both really stink and we had all these bugs on us.
Then we go adventuring around the island all we found was these big massive trees, the next day we go hunting with our spears, all we found were pigs, so we just killed them all and that was our dinner for about a week, time goes by, it's starting to get really boring now, but then a big massive group of helicopters came, we tried yelling, but that didn’t work so we started waving our hand too try and get them to look down here, but obviously that did not work, so, i looked around the boat that we swam from for a mirror and i found one, we reflected the light of the mirror to the helicopter and they came down and picked us up.
Then we finally land back in australia after 3 hours of sleep, then I go to see my wife and my kids and Jake goes home to see his wife and kids, but they did not no I was stranded on a island for nearly a whole year. When I tell her she freaks out and says I have to go to the doctors to get cheeked if there's anything wrong with me, so were in the car talking about how I was stranded on the island, so we get to the hospital and everyone knew i was stranded on an island but they didn't know what one. So once I walked through the entrance of the hospital everyone started yelling “ IT'S THE MAN WHO WAS STRANDED ON THE ISLAND”. Then I get checked the doctor says i'm algood and there is nothing wrong with me. The next day I recieved a email saying “Hello, my name is David, I am here to ask you if you would like to write a book of how it was stranded on the island”, so obviously I replied “Yes”, after about a year my very own book got released and they were all gone the first week, I kept one for myself I also signed it myself as well. Then I meet someone last night while I was having dinner and they asked if i had a book that they could have, so i gave the kid the book that i kept for myself.
TO BE CONTINUED...
During the past week in writing we have been learning to put similes,
During the past week in writing we have been learning to put similes,
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