I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Tyrell, i like the way you put a ;lot of effort into your work on this. next time you could work on the positioning of your arrow on slide 2. Bye Nicholas
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Hi Tyrell good work I liked how you showed how to do it on a computer.
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Nicholas
hi its Simon and I am impressed with all the hard work you have put into your work next time you can make your words more clearer.
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