The intense race
On a really hot sunny 40 degree day on the track, I was in the lead of the intense bike race. I was coming up to the end of the second to last lap, And this loud roaring motor bike drove past me, It was the last lap, The speeding car came roaring past me, i'm nearly at the finish line, Then I go past it and all I could here was My family and my team Screaming!, Now I feel proud because I have won the race for NZ and earned a Gold for the team.
On this snug 19 degree night, Me, my family and team go out for dinner.
Once we got to the restaurant, We saw some supporters as well.
Once we finished we quickly sprinted back to the car, We had to aesthetically jump over multiple objects. Then we got in the car and quickly boosted from the fans.We got home, And we saw some insane supporters hanging of the back of my truck. So we get out and said evacuate the private property and then we never saw the again.
heyy Tyrell i'm Faith, I really like your story and how you described everything really well in the 1st paragraph, next time i think you could put some different punctuation in to make it more effective. I remember when I was 8 we had to write about being in an Olympic sport and I chose biking. do you like biking, is that why you chose that to write about?
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From Faith