I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tyrell, great slide Start to end. Next time maybe you can make it a bit quicker because your slide was really long cause you added in all those squares.
Hey Tyre ll it’s Simon. That slide was a work of art. You are improving more and more . Something you need to work on is your punctuation . How did you get the idea?simon
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Hi Tyrell, great slide Start to end.
ReplyDeleteNext time maybe you can make it a bit quicker because your slide was really long cause you added in all those squares.
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ReplyDeleteHey Tyre ll it’s Simon. That slide was a work of art. You are improving more and more . Something you need to work on is your punctuation . How did you get the idea?simon
ReplyDeleteI really like the ending on the last slide because it is really eye catching
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